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   OliveDreams Admin
   OliveDreams · Aug 22, 2013

   ROLL UP, ROLL UP!
   
   We all know you all have a hidden masterpiece that you want us to see....& review!
   
   So, here's the drill - Post the link to your fantastical piece of writing here! I'm sure we'll all do our duty as a member of Team Green to get round to writing an AWESOME review full of praise & helpful criticism.
   
   Olive <3
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   OliveDreams Admin
   OliveDreams · Aug 22, 2013

   Ill go first.
   
   New Prologue that I've been working on for your eyes only.
   
   Be gentle with me.
   
   Prologue - Shadowdale
   
   Loves.
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   LeoPenrhythm
   LeoPenrhythm · Aug 22, 2013

   I'll go second then....
   
   Sonnet, an experiment with it...it is in the shakespearean form...it is titled "Sonnet 1 (My Only Love)....
   
   ​​Sonnet 1 ( My Only Love)
   
   you guys can bash me up, for I would love to fall just to rise again..
   
   hehehehehe:-)
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   yubbies21
   yubbies21 · Aug 22, 2013

   Third!
   
   Yes, please!
   
   Brain Tumor
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   StefanosVorkas
   StefanosVorkas · Aug 22, 2013

   Sure, I wouldn't say no ^^
   Unnamed Novel - Prologue for fantasy readers, or just about anyone
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   LMJRayner
   LMJRayner · Aug 22, 2013

   A few of mine, a bit of poetry mixed in with a few shorts. I hope you like them.
   
   My Twin Blues = My Twin Blues
   
   Starlight = Starlight
   
   The 5th of September = The 5th of September
   
   
   Shorts :-
   
   One last time = One Last Time
   
   One match = One Match
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   LMJRayner
   LMJRayner · Aug 22, 2013

   Didn't know that it showed the title lol. That's why there's doubles.
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   Willard
   Willard · Aug 22, 2013

   The Apocalypse Is Near
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   deleted17
   deleted17 · Aug 23, 2013

   since I don't know how to link anything, I'll just go ahead let you guys look it up.
   Preventing The End Of The World ENDING.
   I don't understand why it hasn't been reviewed yet. It's been posted for a month!
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    ChangeTheWorld
    ChangeTheWorld · Aug 23, 2013

    I don't know how to link so You guy's can review my first post ever! Called:
    
    Faking Perfect
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    Willard
    Willard · Aug 23, 2013

    Pain+Hatred= Revenge
    It's a very DARK and CREEPY fiction story.
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    thewriterinside
    thewriterinside · Aug 23, 2013

    Here's mine! It's my novel, Unbroken. It's a supernatural romance. I will be posting the next chapter soon. Unbroken
    (prologue)
    Unbroken Part 1: Chapter One
    Unbroken Part 1: Chapter Two
    Unbroken Part 1: Chapter Three
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    OliveDreams Admin
    OliveDreams · Aug 23, 2013

    This is what I like to see LOTS of work for us to snoop through. So excited already! sdiwuebfpawufnoaerbfo[w!
    
    For all future new posters on here, to provide a link to your work:
    1. Have your work on YWS open in a window.
    2. Copy the address bar all the way up there ^^^^^^
    3. Come to this forum topic
    4. Paste that address bar for all to see!
    
    Loves.
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    runawaylove
    runawaylove · Aug 23, 2013

    I want to get a review on my poem The Nomad
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    KittyCatMeow
    KittyCatMeow · Aug 24, 2013

    We could all write the reviews before review day then submit them after it starts.
    
    Previous idea, and all credit in that idea does NOT go to me.

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