Young Writers Society

THE TURTLEDILE HUNTER! Prologue! *song eternity plays* DUN DUN DUN Well anyways in the deep wilderness of Minnesota a Kid named Greg er..... Bob has lost his candy bar to ...

1761 (? My math is off, prolly) *** Churning up rocks and dust along a rutted old post road is a horse, a fresh young bay running at full speed ...

i would love to have something beautiful to tell you, something that would make your eyes shine from the inside and not just because the matches are setting them alight ...

i can only watch you so long before i need to know what's going on because misty-eyes are so overdone especially by young boys and their young hearts just a ...

Ooh, I like it. Especially the last two lines.

Chapter Two: Dressed in my pink dress and pink flip-flops, I walked down the stairs to the kitchen. “Morning, honey,” Mom chirped. “You seem happy this morning. What happened last ...

I'd pick luke since he when he tells it it explains more. Hope I helped.

Very cool. Except for the first two lines: not working. Change 'em or get rid of 'em.

I have been writing a while but this is my first story here so feel free to criticize, its always good to hear what other people have to say. This ...

*shrugs*

A Morning Poem of Peace 7-16-05 The dawn reappears the light waves retain their dignity, as they lasertocrystal dance about us, The warmth is felt again, The dew that is ...

Enjoy. Reflection Isn't Enough Somewhere beyond healthy psychosis, and lost points of view, someone laughs like they got the best of me. Alone and drinking with split personalities, all of ...

Me-You Night angels 7-17-05 Night angels, looming on the edge of their dreamland, stand facing into the crystal full moon, exhale the softly-perfumed dew, pound their feet in nervous anticipation, ...

Warning: If you wish to look on, then beware of my spoiling of the new Harry Potter book, 'Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince'. *waves big sign that says 'Turn ...

Prologue I tried to block the screams of the young girl from my mind as I darted out of the kitchen. Tears blurred my vision as I ran through the ...