Young Writers Society

Okay, well, I'm always for Constructive Critism, and here is what I want reviewed. Soaring Oblivion Never before inside, Have I felt quite like this. This blissful, soaring oblivon, I ...

I threatened to frame myself in a young boys mind, wrapped so carelessly in cottons, using only my salty eyes and sand-tangled hair. I could hear the flutter and click ...

I'm so cold I make your heart stop, Your girl can't say shit, she's a bop. Your a harmless fool, The pussy bows down to Ja Rule. Homie fuck with ...

JK Rowling was definitely writing that epilogue so people would write fanfics!!! So now I'm just responding to that...it's really bad because I wrote it during class when I was ...

with its army of Sugar-Hyped Zombies (from Hell) the Coffee cup sweeps in world Domination. an ordinary Brew? i wish that were true... All Hail the Starbucks Mocha Frappuccino! the ...

*~*~* Khor awoke and sat up. He looked around and sighed. He wrenched the covers off himself and slouched over to the dresser. Eyes half-closed, he grouped around the drawer ...

I wonder what you see, when you look right me. Do you see who I really am? Or just what I pretend to be. When you look into my eyes, ...

I wish I can turn around, So I can look away and couldn't see the ground. There lay the scar of how hard I've hit, the rock bottom that hard ...

Like I've said this is the first piece of fiction that I've attempted to write. I've not given thought to character development or anything - I'm good at that, regularly ...

Chapter III “No! You can’t go!” Hedfeldon stated indignantly. “Why not?” Answered Harestin calmly. “Because we need you here helping with the field.” “It isn’t that hard to watch it ...

The Lake The wavelets of the lake pat against your ankles, like a wagging soggy dog ready to shake and ecstatic to discover a wet coat's ability to cause absolute ...

Chapter Four: Trial Kasia's birthing was long and difficult. Haroun-rän ordered complete silence, and everyone crept about the camp, biting their nails and talking in whispers. Zara, the merchant's w

*removed*

boy and a girl, the best of friends. From elementary to high school from beginning to end. Through all those years their friendship grew. They both felt the same, but ...

[NOTE: The italicised paragraph is what appears at the end of Chapter 34 in Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows. The following is how I was totally expecting the ending ...