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Thanks for the critiques from before. I appreciate them. I swear it isn't as cliche as it sounds.~~~“What is taking them so long!?” Ella mumbled suddenly, taking Justin by surprise. ...

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My other version was a drafter version... this version is probably much better. There will probably be some improvements or grammar... things like that. It'd be nice if you could ...

I am a poetry virgin who always said poetry was not her forte (but I decided to write one to see what the result would be). Also, part of me ...

This is Chapter One of World Apart. Critiques are welcome!! This is my first serious novel. Please tear it up!!______________________________________________________________________________________Cro

I just wrote this now... it's a bit for Altair after the end of the game...enjoy ALTAIRSlowly, and carefully, Altair approached his victim smoothly and with ease. The crowd were ...

Part OneThe unfortunate mark of true artistic genius, I think, is that many only achieve worldwide fame and recognition after they have died. Another indicator is madness, utter and insoluble. ...

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Spoiler! : this is based on a real relationship, only i have turned it so that it is both fictitious and a little more entertaining. I believe in second chances. ...

Hey This is my first time writing poetry ever. So I would love it if you were as harsh as you could be. Thanks She tore your heart outLike a ...

Read the prologue first!! Please critique plot and characters, no nitpicks. Also, for clarity's sake, keep in mind that Mount Olympus is a 'seperate dimension' layered over Earth that the ...

I editted my first three chapters, and wrote more to it. I hope you guys like it! I need a lot of critisism please. And don;t worry, I won't flip ...

just to warn everyone, im not sure if this islyric poetry or not, so im sorry if i'm wrong. Also i have a problem with puncuation in poems, so please ...