Young Writers Society

Please Critique this! The grammar is used like that to convey drunkeness and a tense atmosphere. Prologue Have you ever wondered how life works? The mechanics. Is it just luck ...

I don't much like the line breaks in this. All comments, crits, suggestions welcome. This is the second part to the epigone CL the epigone II. ((helios apartment)) bright, brain ...

Hi, I'm new here and this is a story I wrote just the other day...Plz tell me what you think. Chapter 1 When she stepped outside her heart sank all ...

this poem was writtin when my frien was like nine and now hes twelve. the numbers on my computer quite working and they took most of the punctuation keys with ...

My younger sister, penname Addie Rivers, is holding a contest on writing.com, and this is my entry. The requirements specified 500-1000 words, and the story had to incorporate the line ...

This is for The Black Rose Like Romeo and Juliet, Theirs is a window of love, Which has been torn asunder By hands which cause only Pain, suffering and depression. ...

The suicide speaks My time is comming... I can't take it anymore! The pain, the mysery, the agony the lonelyness My time is now... Don't tell me your sorry It's ...

So... I had a good day FOR YOU, I'LL SPEAK FRENCH 'Meet me under the clock tower at one' she said, and we laughed because we're poets, drunk on a ...

Just another pilot. I call it a pilot because every time I write something it normally doesn't last past the first session. Hopefully this one will. I have a direction ...

erm...new fantasy project. This sort of spawned itself. I even created my own language, well actually several for this. All comments and crits welcome. If you are interested in reading ...

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I. ((antigone)) she dreams of icarus-wings so he paints them there gold-leaf-feather-tips fluttering in the slight breeze. the waft of spice flecks mingle on tongues as she drinks her fill ...

EDIT II: Happy now Bob? Take this for what you will, about your siggy, the only reason I watch Idol is for Simon... Note: I need some major help on ...

So many voices were heard within that room of fears and souls. A nightmare of a place to be with nakedness and cold. She cringed beneath her nothingness a sob ...

Oh dreamer, I think of you as oft as ever and with those thoughts of you I cry. The way you move just like a feather a dreamer dreams of ...