Young Writers Society

“Let’s try this one more time with feeling” A utopia of artists that yearn and ache, swoon and paint in scarlet hues, erratic slashes at the dripping canvas. The poet ...

once it's the new year, it's all over sitting in a crowded waffle house just off the interstate. and everyone's saying, "hey, it's been raining all year" as the drunk ...

City of Bridges She always expects surprise, even here, in the rows of corn and wheat.

Right well, I keep wanting to write a poem so, i did. I would appreciate some useful feedback on this, please if you don't like it just put 'scrap it' ...

A simpleton once tricked himself And thought that he could read. He read himself to death And 'ventually did become a seed. In that lifeless form the seed began to ...

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As the perfect place on earth Italy.Was where it all started.A rose driffted all over the place.The country of love.Angel lass ran after his mystery lover .She wore a jewled ...

*takes a deep breath* I don't have much experience writing poetry, so i'd love to hear what i'm doing right and/or wrong with the following poem. The title is one ...

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A note on the subject. I've recently found out that I probably have General Anxiety Disorder, and hyperactivity. This poem is an embodiment of my feelings and thoughts. It's not ...

Upon the shores of endless green Beside the foaming sapphire sea My family dwelt in tranquil rest For thirty years of joyfulness But tidings, rank with evil news Disturbed me ...

dance is only the opening and closing of legs in a skirt that is always kept down. etiquette is hidden between the blades of my razor, between each pearl-glazed tooth. ...

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...beautiful. I particularly liked the line "the whole-cloth/that is Monday" and the ending was perfect. I also think the structure was well done; it put me off a bit in ...

One little misfire It may be a nuclear weapon Or a few harmful words A mistaken wrong move I causes a world of difference Chaos unravels Disorder erupts Nothing is ...