...beautiful.
I particularly liked the line "the whole-cloth/that is Monday" and the ending was perfect. I also think the structure was well done; it put me off a bit in the first verse, but then I got used to it and it really adds to the light melancholy of the tone.
Kudos 
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Ive nothing to add to this - it was a beatutiful poem and very meaningful - useless critique but Ive nothing to correct.
That was very good. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I'm not sure why, but it reminds me of a book I recently read by my favourite author, Chris Wooding, called Storm Thief. But that's a compliment, because I loved that book.
I have to say, the second stanza is probably one of the most graceful, evocative descriptions of city life that I've read yet--and not just on this site. My only misgiving is about how you've italicized the last line; does it really need the added emphasis? I think it stands strongly enough in its own right, without having to resort to italics.
You sell yourself too short, Brad. The fact that you thought this piece was unworthy... well. There's a reason you're published, isn't there?