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This was one of your more accessible poems. I liked it. One point of concern: "Her taste lingers like languid language leaves the reader speechless." I think a word or ...
Ieatworms - Nov 28, 2005 - 1 min read
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the clock chimes seven I sense my impending doom then my date drives up
Lucifer - Nov 28, 2005 - 1 min read
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i pound the bread dough imagining it’s your face you make me want to eat a bullet, kill myself bread will be fluffy tonight What do you think of the ...
Lucifer - Nov 28, 2005 - 1 min read
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*clicks mouse* - deleted.
thegirlwhofateloves - Nov 28, 2005 - 1 min read
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Lilliane She lays like the night, long black bird lashes Cast against Ivory white chilling skin, Hands folded gently over the dip between her breasts, Her weddingmourn dress pulls at ...
Caligula's Launderette - Nov 28, 2005 - 1 min read
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Dedicated to Shadow Knight DEATH It’s what we like. Our whole lives surround it. We live it We breathe it We eat it. It destroys Like no other Tearing families ...
Snoink - Nov 28, 2005 - 1 min read
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ok now i just wrote this after i told one of my friends why they shouldn't cut themselves. here goes: Her sadness echoed into the bitter night air This was ...
VoLcOlYrO - Nov 27, 2005 - 1 min read
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I love this day I know this day Sunshine bouncing off uneven teeth Oh I love the way you smile Waking on this plane of you I’m saying to no ...
Superfreakazoid - Nov 27, 2005 - 1 min read
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Autumn leaves are falling down Falling down Falling down Autumn leaves are falling down My dear daddy! Get the rake and rake 'em up Rake 'em up Rake 'em up ...
Snoink - Nov 27, 2005 - 1 min read
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Teach Me Poetry has always escaped me, Rhyme and imagery chucked out the window, Structure and meaning all but trampled and mushed, Emotions and insight trodden under my foot and ...
Sureal - Nov 27, 2005 - 1 min read
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>Personally I hardly get this poem, I just sat down one day and wrote it. So i figured I would put it on here just because i can. to get ...
armonia - Nov 26, 2005 - 1 min read
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FREEDOM'S PRICE Twice walked I, upon a land so beauteous, as tore my soul to contemplate a lesser place should even be, exist at all. A pride, thought I, not ...
backgroundbob - Nov 26, 2005 - 2 min read
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I’m forgetting the time, All of my thoughts are arranged in a rhyme, I’m spitting them out line by line. I’m telling my story, I’m setting my stage, I’m spilling ...
LiNdSeYo7 - Nov 26, 2005 - 1 min read
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Wow...I nearly cried reading this...I know I've said that good handful of times before concerning your work but seriously, this broke me down. First off, I'm sorry for everything that ...
Chevy - Nov 26, 2005 - 1 min read
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okaaaaaaaay...sorry I shouldn't have posted at all I don't have any other comment but that.
Misty - Nov 26, 2005 - 1 min read