Seven PM haiku

by Lucifer
  • November 28, 2005
  • Poetry
  • Other

the clock chimes seven
I sense my impending doom
then my date drives up

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Elizabeth
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Elizabeth wrote a review · Tue Nov 29, 2005 12:45 am

AHAHA
I'm sorry that was kinda funny though.
Honestly, it was funny, short, simple, just like a haiku should be.
I liked it... Nothing I could help with without turning it against it's haiku self... Nice :)



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