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Cool Memories I

by Ieatworms

  • Poetry
  • Narrative

Published November 28, 2005

In Old Poetry

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This was one of your more accessible poems. I liked it.

One point of concern:

"Her taste lingers like languid language leaves the reader speechless."

I think a word or comma is missing here.

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PsyLynx commented Comment · Dec 1, 2005

I really like it a lot. Good job.



As a former (and rather excellent) liar herself, Aru knew that, sometimes, speaking the truth felt like wrenching a thorn out of your side. But doing the opposite meant pretending it wasn't there. And that made every single step ache. It was no way to live.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality