To Innocent Eyes - I hate you

by thegirlwhofateloves
  • November 28, 2005
  • Poetry
  • Other

*clicks mouse* - deleted.

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thegirlwhofateloves
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thegirlwhofateloves commented · Tue Nov 29, 2005 9:38 am

Theblackrose - I'm sure that's exactly the same thing that you wrote twice, just in a different way lol :D
Anyone else? Or is it so dreadful it doesn't deserve comments???

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bulletproof commented · Mon Nov 28, 2005 10:17 pm

I would agree withe TBR it is a little confuseing but I liked the poem otherwise!

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Elizabeth
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Elizabeth wrote a review · Mon Nov 28, 2005 7:09 pm

Such innocent eyes, I truly despise
You
So evil
You are
So callous.

These lines confused me...
Is it like "I truely despise you! So evil, you are, so callous!"
Or is it more like, "I truely despise you! You are so evil! You are so callous!"

I got confused. I liked this poem otherwise... Very dark with the word innocence in it though, but good.



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