Young Writers Society

Comments and reviews no matter how short would be great. And if you would like I will review your work in return. I believe this chapter may not be overly ...

Preface A knock came to the thick wooden door of the goldsmith’s house. Outside, the air was chilly with winter. Snow blanketed the ground around the modest cottage where the ...

Os I have this idea that was born last night. This guy wakes up from a 3 month long coma with no memory or records that he ever existed. Then ...

This is one of my better chapters although I'm always looking to improve. Reviews would be great!!! Chapter 10 In horror stories, scary monsters jumping out of the dark ...

When the Raven is "rescued" from her freakshow by a woman claiming to be her grandmother, all she wants is to escape. But dangerous magic and family secrets are stirring, and it might not be as easy as she thinks...

We reappeared in a gigantic room. The floors were that 50’s black and white tile patter, and the walls were covered in that movie theater material in beige. Then all ...

I had enough feedback that I removed this chapter, edited it, and sent it off for honest-to-God proofing. Thank you, YWS. :)

Hopefully this is a good way to start a book!

Because I like action so much, I tried to make these fights scenes as realistic and detailed as possible. Criticism would be amazing, and reviews and all that. ???Scary??? didn???t ...

Chapter 8, things are getting interesting. I hope you enjoy reading this chapter, I enjoyed writing it. Review this and I will love you <3 Nightmares had constantly clawed at ...

Stheno had yanked Jimmy and Selina away, shoving them and threatening them as she led them through ghostly halls. The castle was huge on the outside but it seemed it ...

This is probably the most interesting chapter so far. Reviews would be great! After about an hour of crazy fast driving, the car slowed down, gravel was flung from the ...

Please review! Enjoy. She was obviously moving, due to the gentle hum of the motor, and the occasional bumps that thrashed her up and down, plus the general motion of ...

Things get more interesting here, this is when the action really starts to happen. I'd love to hear what you think of this chapter. ???Good evening Moina, we have guests,??? ...

I'm thinking this chapter is less boring then the two before it, but then again, I'm the writer and you're the reader. Criticize away! : ) After a while Selina ...