Young Writers Society

I have just finished this rough draft of chapter two. I plan on making the corrections to chapter one, and hopefully this chapter tonight This one is a little bit ...

My brother has wanted me to write this for him. He came up with the idea and I've been writing it. I think it's coming along pretty good. The ending ...

a very short chapter indeed. only about 600 words. I am not the world's best author and this is all just for fun. So any advice or critique would be ...

Yay! I changed it. But didn't change it. But did. Basically rewrote it, so it is a little more friendly. Let nothing go wrong today, for the Sisters are pickier ...

MAJOR EDITS! WILL BE UP SOON!

...He was standing at about two malcies away from the rickyd. I knew better than to shout for fear of being discovered. It was Hashkü! And then, it seemed that ...

I just got all of your messages, and I do realize that I need to work with the feelings a bit. As the mind-numbing blackness of the Change faded away, ...

Chapter 4 Questioned plagued Alexzander mind, as he tried to work out everything: What was going on today?Was Mum okay?Was Father all right? He came to the big top, hearing ...

Here is a revised version of my novel. I hated this part of the job. I always have, and I suspect, I always will. I was imprisoned in a black ...

Saari gagged as her head went under again. She thrashed in the water, her head briefly flashing above with a gurgled cry before ducking again. Everything burned, her vision was ...

Chapter 3: The Little Woods My entire body began to be covered in scrapes and bruises as I squished myself among the extremely dense, thick, and rough trees of the ...

---

Chapter 2: Pepin, Wisconsin As my dad’s buddy pulled his car and us into Pepin, my heart literally got caught someplace between my throat and stomach. Coming from such a ...

Chapter 1: Echo Dibrom and Company The name is Dibrom—Echo Dibrom. I don’t know I just love the way James Bond says his name like that. I really do. I’m ...

Out of the four point of views I've written from, I've found Paul (and this chapter) to be the most fun by far. *** San Diego, CaliforniaEight Years Earlier His ...