Young Writers Society

Here it is, the first section of the second chapter. I'd really appreciate your feedback, especially if you think it is horrible. I am so new at Fantasy that I ...

Chapter 1 I walked through the town streets, retraining myself from running. It was a dreary afternoon and not many people populated the usually crowded streets. Even with a clear ...

Chapter 3 A beautiful sound filled the darkness. A melodious tune unlike any Ivy had ever heard. But it didn’t fit. She had swooned only a few hours ago and ...

This "Ending" is just a SMALL portion of the FINAL chapter of book 1. I've gotten an opinion on this, and was told it was very interesting. -wink- I wanted ...

Chapter 1 Ivy Henderson rested behind an old pine desk that sat kitty-corner to an electric piano. The wood floor was stained with years of rolling her chair from the ...

I'm having a lot of trouble with this story, so any suggestions are absolutely welcome. Please be brutally honest. I need help!!! The Sadism Circus Kamir was not fond of ...

Let me know what you think about the overlook. If people like it, then I will start writing the book. Thanks! Kylee and The Mermaid Kindom Overlook: Kylee is a ...

This is the end of chapter one so let me know what you think!!! Thanks for your reviews!! As she escaped back out into the fresh air Amarie reflected on ...

Here is another section. Give me your most honest feedback. Sorry if it is a bit long I was trying to divide the chapter up into four sections. Sun filtered ...

Chapter Three It had been an eventful, amusing day. Jeff, Keith, Alyssa, and I had all gone to the meadow where we’d always played as pups. The entire time we ...

Chapter four The Village With a Mystery The Canaby sisters landed in a shanty village, it was a village like they’ve never seen before, witches and wizards roamed the cobble ...

Let me know what you think!!!! Back downstairs Amarie choose a round table close to the massive fire place. Early spring still brought a chill to the nights of Chevara ...

My chapters are long so I will divide them into sections. This is just a sampling, there is more to come! But be brutally honest and let me know what ...

Okay, THIS is the last one of these until I get more feedback. Three The place Amelia had thought was the Kay County Fair turned out to be just as ...

The Tears of the Dead A wail sounded in the usually quiet neighborhood. Within the dark house, someone flicked on a lamp. "Hush, baby, hush," A gentle voice cooed in ...