The good thing about always being cold is that you never have to worry about it being too hot.
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Yeah absolutely right. But there are other advantages of being cold too. Like you can be cold and icy to people you hate
. Then there is the fact that you can enjoy all the hot dishes and drinks. Winter is also all about romance and adventure with the snow n all...
And finally don't mind my cutting in like this. To be frank I need some points fast an dI guess this is the only way..
dont worry heheh
Huh? I guess I agree...
thanks
Hello tigeraye!
(never used that word before...) If you do, which it is perfectly fine right now, but if you do, you could change it to "The Thing About Being Cold", since your piece is about being cold, and not necessarily 'the cold'. Just a thought. 
Good grief, it seems that there are a lot more of these this time of year. (I don't know why, it just seems like I'm seeing them more and more...) So, it's a good think I like them!
The only thing I would say about this is that you could change the title just a smidgen...
It still kind of reminds me of a poem, but not quite. Shel Silverstein writes a bunch of these types of things, which I absolutely adore .
Any-who, I guess that's all. Except, have a good day/night, and keep writing!
~Snazzy
uh, thanks for reviewing. This was originally going to be longer, but I've had writers flu for like two weeks now x_x