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by thetraveler


I'm going to remake this, everyone. PLEASE DON'T BE DISCOURAGED IF YOU ACTUALLY LIKE MY SCRIBBLES!!!


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Tue Sep 18, 2012 12:42 am
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kimmybee wrote a review...



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Could you put this in a more structured manner? i.e. separate into paragraphs etc according tot he basic rules of story writing so as to not scare of persons who may have been looking forward to reading this- because it does look like and interesting from outside. On entry though it's :/ however will I get out of this maze. Of coures reading it is worth it but that's for those who aren't scared by the lack of visual appeal.

I would in fact LOVE to read a story as you are suggesting here! It gives me a Sherlock feel (the part where the protagonist yearns for a case more edgy, more intellectually demanding); me gusta !!!!;)

Yup definitely Sherlock my friend! This would make an awesome fanfic >.> *that moment when you itch to write this but you fear not doing your fandom justice* *sigh*
That's all. :3




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There's another Sherlock fan here?? *DIES*

Sorry... Anywho, I agree. I think I'll change the formating some. The thing is, I had it typed nicely into a microsoft document, but when I copied it, I guess I failed... Thanks for the advice, though. :D
*I still can't get over the fact that you like Sherlock. I AM AN OBSESSIONIST!!!*




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