Young Writers Society

This was an interesting collection of poems. It detailed some fandoms I am a part of, others I'm not, yet it still portrayed them well enough. I feel like these are the poems you were telling me about a couple of weeks ago, and they're all exceedingly lovely. I'm glad I found this batch.

I have a few complaints I have to make that may or may not be important, but I thought these would be a couple of things you'd like to know about:

-"Belgravia is a place of scandals and Baskerville a place of hounds" This is just an opinion, but I felt like these two could be separated to make each stronger. You split the other cases differently, why pretend these two are conjoined? Are Baskerville and Belgravia somehow linked in your poem? If it is, then I apologize.

-"Physics, physics, physics, physics" Haha, Doctor Who. I'm not a part of the fandom mind you, but I've seen the memes through tumblr osmosis. Still, do you think this would be a good way to start out the poem? It comes off as almost too much occasionally, even though it definitely is humorous.

-"Resting upon them are destinies and they dare not disappoint" I wanted to suggest the same as the first 'complaint', which you definitely don't have to take.

Other than that, though, I can safely say that this was a fun read. You definitely know your fandoms, and your obsessions have proven contagious. I'd be glad to read more of these poems.

On another note. By any chance are you going to make a Marvel one? Have you already? Or will we never see something like that come to light?

Signing Out,

--EM.

Hello!
I am like your idea of short poems, they are, i don't know why?-"cute"!
The first one-
Oh! I loved it so much. I am going to sing that in class tomorrow! I know it isn't necessary but when you write short poems and you want to sing them along try to follow some sort of rhyme scheme! Though, It is pretty as it is!

The second one-
I do not understand it! But I like it's last line is so catchy! Is it about army life?

The third one-
Isn't it from a television series? This acronym? Here two the last two line's are the soul of the poem!

The fourth one-
Why is it all about safety? Never mind, it's cool! I dare not find any grammatical errors till now. Actually your views are clear but since they don't have a topic we can't actually tell how 'relatable' they are.

The fifth one-
Uh! these prose are amazing. You can actually sing them along in a situation. You know what? you can actually write a lyrical..just like the Les Miserable!

The sixth one-
This one is my favorite! Maybe because it is something i always wanted to write about but could never.

Overall, i can't find any grammatical errors in your poems. Aren't they prose? They are good, but i would like it if you can post them separately with headings!
So that we can review from a wide angle.
Finally-SUPERB!
loves and regards!