This was quite an empowering poem, especially for those who struggle with self-esteem. I love how 'You' is repeated throughout, laying a strong emphasis on the reader and how they're more - it's powerful and inspiring.
I think these are my favourite lines!
"That all of your self reflections
Should be seen from the open end
Of an acute angle"
I'm not sure I understood them right but I felt you meant to emphasise on how our own ideas of ourselves don't quite constitute the whole of our identity and we should realise that; as the open end of an acute angle is quite narrow as opposed to say, an obtuse angle.
I also enjoyed the lack of punctuation throughout, except in the last line. I don't do that often and it was interesting to see how it's absence didn't take away from the poem.
Thank you so much for sharing!
-D
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