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I really loved this.
I think that you put this together really well. So I was going to review, but I'm not a big poetry expert. From what I can tell, there isn't really anything that is wrong with this. 
I love how you expressed these questions that people have everyday though. Keep at it!
Keep On Writing!
--Jalmoc
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