Tangled, Broken, Mess of a Heart

by heather321

  • Poetry

Published March 5, 2012

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Tangled, Broken, Mess of a Heart

You.
You came and tried to fix my heart,
Slowly, carefully, placing the tiny, shattered pieces back together.
Your love threaded its way
Through the cracks of my heart
until finally, i was okay again.

You.
You let the thread weave itself into me
Intricately
Delicately
Holding me together
Until you became an inseperable part of me

You.
You changed your mind,
Or got confused
Or.. I don't know.. but you were different...confusing..
You spun me in circles
Until the thread was tangled to point where it couldn't be untied

You.
You turned my heart into a knot
So wild
So twisted
That it can't be undone
Until the day you come back and help me fix my heart once again.

You.
You came. 
Came to put me back together.
You left.
Left me,
With a tangled, broken, mess of a heart.
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Road To Darkness commented Comment · Mar 10, 2012

"peices" should be "pieces." Your "i" should be "I." "Until the day I you" is there supposed to be an I in there? Because if you removed the I the poem would be perfected. Which is not possible but it would be really good, which in my mind, is perfect. It's a really great poem. I enjoyed reading it.



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