A short review for a short chapter!
"I'm craving chili right now," Morgan said. So... not the same thing. Good to know. "Really?" I asked.
I mean, this is an important thing that often doesn't get covered off in questing. Prioritise food!
"whaaaaaaaaaa! Someone screamed. Me and Morgan looked up and saw... Sam, Cheyenne and Mochii falling from the trees? Then- "OOF!" Mochii literally landed on me!
Love the onomatopoeia (also, I spelt that right first time and I need the world to know)!
"We all are!" said Cheyenne defensively. "Not just you, Mochii!" Mochii glared at her. "Don't say that!" she said, and they both started arguing.
Wait, what happened to the chilli?!
Did they not get to eat the chilli? I'm too invested in the eating habits of this adventure xD
Also this:
"Guys!" I cried, and pointed at some thing in front of us.
Something should just be the one word here.
Loving the chaos!
Icy
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