Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
First Impression: Well it looks like things are heating up on the other side of things as well. Well the introduction of the parents definitely makes things a lot more interesting and ahhh that ending creates so many questions.
Anyway let's get right to it,
"Where is she?!" yelled Charlotte in an exasperated tone. "Where is Ellie?!"
"I'm sure she's fine." said Maddie. "Juuuust relax. Aren't your parents coming home from Rome soon?" Charlotte groaned. They were, but what about her sister? She'd just mysteriously disappeared from the entire world! Where was she? Why wasn't she here? They needed to find her, stat.
"They are!" Charlotte said. "But how do I get back home?!" After all, technically, she fell out of the sky. From her basement. Because of a ghost.
"Obviously, you fly." said Maddie. "You have magic, remember."
Well this already seems like we're in the midst of quite the pickle there. It seems we're not going to quite get to the whole two Ellie's thing just yet because we're focusing on the rest of the squad for this particular moment. Well let's see where this goes.
whaaaaaaaaaa SPLAT!
"What the !*@&%!" Yelled a familiar voice, and Charlotte nearly had a heart attack. A super duper one. She looked up, and noticed a glowing portal in the sky, and-
"Mother?! Father?!" yelled Charlotte. "What the heck are you doing here?!" Her parents were here! Her parents- why were her parents here?!
"Charlotte!" yelled her mother, running over to hug her. "What are you doing here?" She pulled her daughter into a hug.
"Well!" Father said. "Looks like it's time to learn the truth..."
"What truth?"
Well that was definitely not who I was expecting to see fall out of the sky there. It looks like we're now about to get quite a bit of extra information there. The two of them definitely seem be setting up to reveal some pretty big things in this particular moment.
"The truth is, we already knew this portal was here." said mother. "Your great-great-great-great-great-great to the power of ten grandparents discovered this place. it's whole reason we bought this house. When you weren't at home when we came- the plane came early- we thought you fell into the portal! So we checked, and- here you are... wait, where's Ellie!"
"That's the thing..." said Charlotte, before (prepare yourself) "weallwentonagiganticquesttostopalltheevilwitcheswhokidnappedeveryone,and,well,afterthatwewerekindoffamous,sotherewasatnofreportesandElliejustsortofdisappeared!"
"Ellie kind of disappeared?" asked Maddie suspiciously. "You can't kind of disappear."
"Well!" said Father. "We should probably look for her,"
Okayy it looks like that particular explanation was stopped for a moment by the whole Ellie situation that is currently taking place elsewhere. Well let's hope we can check back in on Ellie sometime soon. At least we know she isn't hurt at the moment.
"No sign of her!" Charlotte said, once again exasperated. "What do we do?!"
"Well..." said Father. "You have school tomorrow, so we need to go home. We can leave out some posters for Ellie."
"Okay.." said Charlotte, and walked right through the portal. As soon as she came out, they had dinner and Charlotte went to bed.
later.
Charlotte woke up in the middle of the night. She had a nightmare and looked around at her dark room.
Then a voice said, "say anything and you die."
Okayy...well that was quite the sort of double cliffhanger there. Ahh...well it looks like we have a few more layers here than we noticed at first. I can't wait to se what chapter five will look like.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Overall, it seems like once again we've got quite a bit unfolding here. Definitely a lot of things to sit and unpack in this moment. I can't wait to see what chapter five has in terms of the Ellie situation and what happens to Charlotte there.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Kate
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