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The Accidental Magic 2- the second to last unicorn- chapter 6

by foxmaster


"HIIIIII-YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" Charlotte screamed and kicked down the door like the human reincarnation of Kung-Fu Panda.

"Stop and put your hands up!!! OR else!!!!!!" Charlotte hit a fireball and everyone on the floor of the bank screamed in fear. "You will be crispier than cheese crisps!" (It was not Charlotte's best moment. In addition, this would eventually be uploaded onto YouTube and get over two million likes, and some of the comments would contain some very... colorful language.) 

Missy turned around and cackled ominously. What a cliché, thought Charlotte. What kind of evil witch villain even bothered cackling crazily anymore? 

"Prepare to be dominated!!" Missy cackled. "Mua-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-haaaaaaa!" Charlotte cringed. And then- she literally groaned at how stupid her idea was. After all, who ever defeated someone evil with a dance battle? That was cringier than a Tik-tok made by Charlotte's three year old cousin. Oh, what her brain came up with some days.

But, alas, that may have been the only chance she may ever get to do such a thing. As often as her characters in the stories she made in Creative Writing danced and sung We Don't Talk About Bruno, how many times would she do that in the real world? Like, never. Charlotte made a mental note to ask Maddie about Dance Battles the next time she'd see her. And then, Charlotte did the stupidest thing in her life.

"Let's do a dance battle!" She yelled. Missy paused and stared at Charlotte like she'd grown a second head that could only speak dog. 

"A what?!" she asked.

"Uh, you know, like, I turn on music and we dance to see who's the best? Like, the non-violent way of fighting?" Missy coughed.

"That is the most idiotic thing I have ever heard of." she said.

"You're the one who's evil," Charlotte said, before walking over to the nearest person she saw, asked to borrow their phone, and knew that this was like something in the movie Idiocracy. Seriously, though.

She went onto Spotify and tapped onto the nearest song she noticed, which, unfortunately, was Gangnam Style. Charlotte was [quite] immature for her age, so the moment she heard the opening tune, she burst into uncontrollable laughter. Was it her fault she found the circle of life hilarious?

Yes, it was.

"Um." said Missy, staring at Charlotte, rolling on the floor. "Should we begin?"

"Oh, yeah," Charlotte said, and restarted the song. Luckily, she was a master at the game Just Dance (at least when she watched the videos on YouTube,) and began dancing like the queen of dances.

"HA-HA-HA-HA-HA!" Charlotte screamed. "I am the best! Are I not?"

Missy simply stared and waved her arms around a bit. It was clear that Charlotte was the winner. Unfortunately, (or, fortunately, depending on how you look at it, I guess,) well, the moment the song ended....

BOOM!

Missy collapsed onto a heap on the ground! :0


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It’s a good thing that Missy can’t dance, because that would be trouble for Charlotte. Is Missy dead or injured? I think she might be injured because there’s more coming up from this story. Missy seemed alright in part one, I wonder why she’s evil. What happened to make her rob a bank? Perhaps she was a victim of the Queen and had turned evil after the Queen hurt her for so many years? That’s just my theory, though. I can’t wait to read more of this!

I wish you an amazing day/night.




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thanks! The thing about Missy gets rrrreally confusing later on though.



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Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),

Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!

First Impression: Well this is quite the chapter this one. I wasn't expecting it to be particularly fun given the kind of start we had but it got pretty hilarious as we went on and got into the more funny moments and well this has ended in a bang here.

Anyway let's get right to it,

"HIIIIII-YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" Charlotte screamed and kicked down the door like the human reincarnation of Kung-Fu Panda.

"Stop and put your hands up!!! OR else!!!!!!" Charlotte hit a fireball and everyone on the floor of the bank screamed in fear. "You will be crispier than cheese crisps!" (It was not Charlotte's best moment. In addition, this would eventually be uploaded onto YouTube and get over two million likes, and some of the comments would contain some very... colorful language.)

Missy turned around and cackled ominously. What a cliché, thought Charlotte. What kind of evil witch villain even bothered cackling crazily anymore?


Well this is quite the opening move here. I am loving this. I am not entirely certain if this is meant to be fully serious because I was mostly laughing really hard at this but I can see the bits of terror that it possesses as well.

"Prepare to be dominated!!" Missy cackled. "Mua-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-haaaaaaa!" Charlotte cringed. And then- she literally groaned at how stupid her idea was. After all, who ever defeated someone evil with a dance battle? That was cringier than a Tik-tok made by Charlotte's three year old cousin. Oh, what her brain came up with some days.

But, alas, that may have been the only chance she may ever get to do such a thing. As often as her characters in the stories she made in Creative Writing danced and sung We Don't Talk About Bruno, how many times would she do that in the real world? Like, never. Charlotte made a mental note to ask Maddie about Dance Battles the next time she'd see her. And then, Charlotte did the stupidest thing in her life.


Well that definitely makes certainly that was definitely meant to be as funny as it turned out to be there. And now we're getting some even funnier moments there and I'm loving this so far. Things are shaping up quite nicely for the moment to be a fairly fun chapter this.

"Let's do a dance battle!" She yelled. Missy paused and stared at Charlotte like she'd grown a second head that could only speak dog.

"A what?!" she asked.

"Uh, you know, like, I turn on music and we dance to see who's the best? Like, the non-violent way of fighting?" Missy coughed.

"That is the most idiotic thing I have ever heard of." she said.

"You're the one who's evil," Charlotte said, before walking over to the nearest person she saw, asked to borrow their phone, and knew that this was like something in the movie Idiocracy. Seriously, though.


Well at the very least it seems like that particular battle is going to result in fairly non violent outcomes so at the very least the more fun vibes that this chapter has so far had will remain preserved. Let's see where this is going next.

She went onto Spotify and tapped onto the nearest song she noticed, which, unfortunately, was Gangnam Style. Charlotte was [quite] immature for her age, so the moment she heard the opening tune, she burst into uncontrollable laughter. Was it her fault she found the circle of life hilarious?

Yes, it was.

"Um." said Missy, staring at Charlotte, rolling on the floor. "Should we begin?"

"Oh, yeah," Charlotte said, and restarted the song. Luckily, she was a master at the game Just Dance (at least when she watched the videos on YouTube,) and began dancing like the queen of dances.

"HA-HA-HA-HA-HA!" Charlotte screamed. "I am the best! Are I not?"


Well that was most definitely quite the hilarious moment in terms of the song choice although it looks like despite all of that Charlotte is just powering there and has her mind set on simply just winning here instead of laughing.

Missy simply stared and waved her arms around a bit. It was clear that Charlotte was the winner. Unfortunately, (or, fortunately, depending on how you look at it, I guess,) well, the moment the song ended....

BOOM!

Missy collapsed onto a heap on the ground! :0


Well that was quite the ending. Oh dear. Things remained fairly festive right until that last moment and we are ending with a literal bang there. Looking forward to seeing what exactly managed to happen there.

Aaaaand that's it for this one.

Overall: Overall and interesting little chapter. Not exactly what I was expecting given where we ended the previous one, but I am very excited to see what that big boom there at the end could mean.

As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.

Stay Safe
Kate




foxmaster says...


thank you!!! I just apologize for adding so many of these :0 emojis, because I have no idea why I did that, but that's life for you I guess.




Men occasionally stumble over the truth, but most of them pick themselves up and hurry off as if nothing had happened.
— Winston Churchill