As promised... Part 2 of the Winter poem series lol. You can check out my other poem on my portfolio "sea of snow" if you want to see that one. You don't have to read it to understand this one. Anyways I decided "why not, I guess I'll just root both of them in greek mythology" cause Greek Mythology is definitely the best!!! Well anyways... notice how in the bad poem everything was feeling and sound and how the snow felt. Everything in this poem is all visual. Do enjoy!!
Stars rain from the skies
to cover their mistress before her arise.
Diamonds fill the soft winter air,
as they descend to the ground, sitting lonely and bare.
Gaia beams as the snow shelters her face
and sews together with effortless grace.
Now they go and embroider her chest.
Stitching together to form a lavished dress.
Her diamond gown shimmers and shines
around her enchanting body, that it entwines.
Her silver eyes glimmer and glow
in this perfect world, made of snow.
On Gaia's hair sits a tiara of ice,
to all nature she does entice
with her body that so freely she gives,
for any and all to live.
In Gaia's elegant dress she sines,
with enchantment and beauty divine.
A gentle wind blows her silver hair
as it glides in the gentle winter air.
TuckEr EllsworTh 
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