AnyBody Wants to Buy a Heart?

I really liked this poem a lot.It has been written with so much emotion i'm lead to believing that the poet has just broken-up with someone.I really like the way you repeated the line 'any body wants a heart'.The emotions show truth,bitter,resentment and so many feelings i can't describe. I personally feel that there were no faults in this poem.I like a lot of line but since it is almost all the line ill only tell you about a select few.
so here we go-
1)'Any Body Wants to Buy A Heart?

I dont want it anymore, Its up for grabs' - I liked this line because it leaves a mark in my mind when i read it aloud especially the "it's up for grabs part".

2)'Yes I know, but if you cant hanlde me at my worst

Then you dont dervese my best '-If i'm not wrong this a quote or something like that.But i still like it a lot as it is very true .If you want someone you should put up with all their sides.

i'm so sorry that i can't writ more i want to but my mom is calling me so i need to go.
lovely poem once again.I would like to see more of your work in future.

Hey there! This piece is very relatable and I love how you put this confused, broken feeling into actual words! Great job!!!
I have a small question, however. Why do you capitalize random letters and words throughout the piece? I know writing has no rules, so is it supposed to be symbolic or mean anything? Unless you break away from the basic rules (capitalize at the beginning of sentences, proper names, etc.) for a meaning, I would not reccomend doing so. It can distract the reader and make it seem confusing or incomplete.
There are also a few commas that should be taken out. For example, "When you and I, are over." There should not be a comma after I.
Another little rule in English is to refrain from ending a sentence or phrase in a preposition. Instead of saying, "I opened my heart up, for a minute," I would say, "I opened up my heart just for a minute" or even "I opened up my heart for a minute."
I personally know exactly what you are saying here. Right now, I'm sick and tired of stressing and worrying about trying to be what other people want me to be and it's comforting to know that there are other people out there like me, and I'm not alone. Thank you.

I s'pose I'll just bang this out as I see it, first. Hi, I'm Wrisky.

"wamts" -- a typo in that first line

"if anybody wants to know?" does not need a question mark, but in poetry, if you want it there, it doth stand.

"When it over" -- you probably want its, there, no apostrophe

Your quicksand has an O at the beginning. I'm seeing a lot of typos. Nothing to worry about.

"Mintue" instead of minute.

Ah, I think I see Marilyn Monroe in there. Never seen a quote in a poem b4. Pretty neat.

Just go back and check for typos, unless you purposely misspelled them on purpose for emphasis, and if that's the case, well, it really distracts, instead helping the effect.

"I'm just over the stuff you do." -- you might say, i'm just over your stuff, or your shat, or your bull. I mean, you can be real artsy-fartsy with this stuff. This is poetry. Don't just say stuff. Paint us a picture. Gloss everything over. Make bubbles float out of that pen.

I saw flashes of poetry here, good signs of potential. Especially parts where you talk about putting your heart up for sale. Yes! That's where Poetry rings! Most everywhere else you just told it like a story, like you could have almost crafted a short story out of it. Really play with all your literary devices, expecially imagery, and you can take poems like this, to new heights.

Wishing you the best,

The Kid who Pumps Risk