It was short but it was very deep. You have explained a realistic side of education and are showing just how big of an echo chamber we live in. The school system is outdated and I agree something needs to be changed. You use punctuation and a range of sentences to make it dramatic sad or sound more angry. I don't see any grammatical errors so on that front it is pretty good. There was such a good rhythm to it since you used rhyming to make it catchy. I was bopping my head along to it and I can clearly imagine this poem which is just made out of words being spoke to me. It is impressive how you got your point across and it is something that is usually ignored by people. WE NEED TO WAKE UP.
Keep it up man. We need more excellent poems like this
Points: 212
Reviews: 4
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