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Awww, that was really sweet.
I love it. I don't see any mistakes (I hope there wouldn't be any for something so short), so good job! 
Sorry that this isn't much of a review, but I congratulate you on such a sweet piece. 
Please keep writing and let us see more of your work! 
Keep On Writing!!!
--Jalmoc
I feel like this would make a great greeting card.
hehe, great wordplay!
though short, I enjoyed it 'cause it kinda left me feeling like there is more to it. like, another 3-4 hidden verses, and you just gave us the epilogue.
think about it!
Hello!
I thought this was really cute. It reminded me of when I was a little kid and used to watch a lot of toy story.
Sweet and just a teeny bit cheesy.
I love it.