Inception

by Pom

Published April 4, 2012

In Poetry

A dream,
Within a dream,
Within a dream,
 
Is a figment of your imagination,
Torn, between what is right,
Or giving in to temptation
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plathonstone
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plathonstone commented Comment · Jul 1, 2015

I loved the movie Inception! It was confusing like this poem haha. I see you have quit by the other review. But I loved the movie so had to read this poem.

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deletedaug23 wrote a review Review · Jul 4, 2013

I never understood Inception, so I really don't understand this.
I get the
"A dream,
Within a dream,
Within a dream,"

part. Im really confused, especially the second part. To me, it just doesn't make sense. Giving into temptation is bad, I know. It could also probably be good. I really don't get this

4.7/10
I know you quit a year ago, but hey, it still is good to get reviewed. It could be 5 years ago and I would still review it.

silentpatronus wrote a review Review · Feb 24, 2013

I’m going to review your work! ☺

This is a short yet powerful poem! It is very good! It takes a while to digest though, can be confusing.

Or giving in to temptation

Full stop is necessary at the end.

I like how it is a one-sentence poem. It is thought provoking and effective!



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