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The rhythm is a bit off in my mind. Perhaps it would be better
There is nothing left to say
You took all my pain away
I want you with me every day
Don't. Leave. Me.
Just some interesting punctuation. I like to play around with these. I really like the poem, short and sweet. The end of an addiction is always painful. You come to love feelings like people who give you feelings. When the source goes away, its heartbreak.