It's about a famous girl being torn apart by lies. She just wants the guy to realize everything she's going through;to maybe get him back for who she really is. Please review? 
Take a breathe and find
Yourself being watched behind the blinds
You don't want to see
The world seeing through your eyes
Don't you understand me?
This is what it's like for me
You think you know everything
And the truth you can't even see
I'm just a girl in the everyday life
There's not much except the fame I try to hide
I can't stand the way everyone looks down on me
tearing me apart with their lies- I want you to Realize.
I can barely touch the sky
There's no reason I shouldn't try
To find that part of you
Where the past is here and we're alright...
'Cuz Once we knew eachother best
But then you grew up like the rest
Taking granted of who I am
I just want you to Realize.
I'm just a girl in the everyday life
There's not much except the fame I try to hide
I can't stand the way everyone looks down on me
i just want to be loved right. I want you to Realize.
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I've decided to venture into lyrics to see what all the fuss is about. I loved this. I write lyric poetry and I'm trying to turn my work into songs, as I'm collaborating with a musician friend of mine. You clearly are a talented writer. I loved this song. I can relate with the girl about her relationship troubles but sadly not with the fame aspect. I think that you have wrote something good and meaningful. I just wish we could hear the music back it up. Well done. I hope you don't think me rude if I ask you to review a poem of mine called "Dirty fashion". I want to transform it into lyrics, with some synthpop music to back it up. If you have any tips on how I could do that, they would be welcome. Great lyrics again.
-Matt