Took a look out my door
Found myself wanting more
All I have is a string of hope
There is more I'm asking for
More.
Sketching memories all over again
Maybe everything could be clear, then
The rain would start falling thin
And keep me from staying in
So tired of missing him, so sick
Stay strong-maybe words can fix
They say Love never let's go and It
Has me wanting what I've always wanted
Took a look out my door
Found myself wanting more
All I have is a string of Hope
There is more I'm asking for
More.
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Awesome!
I read the first verse and thought "Oh dear, this is going to need work," but after reading to the end, the first verse makes a lot of sense. The only issue is that I had to link it to Kingdom Hearts, so certain lines may seem out of place to people who aren't familiar with the game. I'm assuming that's what it is based on.
I like your use of colour too. Coloured font in poetry can seem quite amaturish, but you've pulled it off. Good work