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Ha, this was an experiment!!! Girl never told guy goodbye, wants to say hello again...cause she misses him or something, 
Please review and criticize, I Love your opinions. 
V1 I'm wandering along the road
I hope to see you there,
These sighs are endless- words are slow
I keep forgetting which way to go,
Bridge Hold me, let's pretend I told you goodbye
Who am I kidding, is this the end? Hold on tight
Chorus Goodbye,
Wish I would've told you
Wherever you are just know
I've been dying to say hello
V2 You're out of reach in this world
My heart is pulsating harder as I twirl
In constant circles- The sky isn't falling first
But my mind is, from the edge of the universe
Chorus 2 Hello,
Wish I could now tell you
Somehow we're still searching (Whoa)
I should've first said goodbye
Sign off Main Goodbye, Hello
I love you and it hurts to grow
Up from the bedroom looking out my window
Without...even saying goodbye(the first time...ooh)
I like it...kind of 
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Aww, so sweet.
The 'Woah' thing is a little annoying, especially since it seems to be used as a form of expression, it just seems like these lyrics are brilliant on their own without adding that in. Of course, I don't know what the music sounds like, so if their needs to be some vocals to fill it out then it might work.
I really like this. The message and the way its told are both very simple, but that's what's so good about it. The lack of over-expression and clutter makes it all the more better. Nice work