Silence... calls.
Our death bed... calls.
Our universe will crash around us,
And we will... fall.
...
No,
You won't admit defeat here,
There so much life that you have to hold dear.
And you're coming with me!
And I'll show you!
You shine like the sun on a bright day!
And glow like the moon on a dark day!
And live life every single day,
And dance all the pain away.
So shine like the sun on a bright day!
And glow like the moon on a dark day!
And don't worry you have so much time,
To let the world see you... shine!
So young and afraid of the years you gave to pain,
That all that you know are lies.
And you don't even know of the world outside your window
,
And the life you'd leave behind.
Trust me 'cause I've been there,
And trust when I say it ain't fair.
'Cause you have such a wonderful ride.
I promise you you'll have a wonderful time.
Cause,
You shine like the sun on a bright day!
And glow like the moon on a dark day!
And live life every single day,
And dance all the pain away!
So shine like the sun on a bright day!
And glow like the moon on a dark day!
And don't worry you have so much time,
To let the world see you... shine!
Shine brighter than a thousand suns in the sky...
And glow like the colors on the Fourth of July...
And take your life one amazing step at a time...
And you'll find.
...You shine like the sun...
...And glow like the moon...
...
And soar like a shooting star!
And love when your life starts to bloom!
So shine like the sun on a bright day!
And glow like the moon on a dark day!
And live life every single day,
And dance all the pain away!
Shine like the sun on a bright day!
Glow like the moon on a dark day!
And when you think you don't have the time...
Don't you see the world loves watching you shine?!
So go out and shine!
Oh, go for the ride and shine!
Live your life and shine!
Oh, just shine...
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Just a comment because there is nothing to criticize in this song.
Ossum, you should do work for a big-time singer or just produce these songs yourself... Because all of them have been SO AWESOME!!!
So beautiful...
~Timmyjake
I-I .... Thank you. ^-^
Hello my friend! It's BlimeyLimey217 here to review another amazing work of art!
I really loved this song! It was really encouraging and uplifting! I really loved the flow of this song! It was really good!
First of all, as always this is beautiful!
Secondly, I didn't see any immediate problems with the grammar! Everything was perfection!
Lastly, I really enjoy all your writing! Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read more!
Your friend,
BlimeyLimey217
Thaaaaaank you ^_^
beautiful as usual..... keep writing
Great this makes me think of bullying therepy for some reason. Good punchuation, good words, it rhymed right? haha the end 'Oh, just shine...' this piece of work isnt the best it kinda repeats itself but I feel like it is inspiring. Inspiring for someone who can relate in the way of they need someone to understand them. And this is relatable good work, I'd like to read more of your work.
Thank you ^-^
Means alot.
And of course, go on and read more ^_^