You're gorgeous and crazy,
You're silly and weird.
You tell me everything I ever wanna hear.
And like fireflies,
Like butterflies tonight,
Love flies.
I'm smack dab in the middle,
Of one of those really lovely days.
Thinking about all the times,
I get to say.
That I will always be there,
In the sunshine or the rain.
And this is the promise,
I make,
To you.
You're gorgeous and crazy,
You're silly and weird.
You tell me everything I ever wanna hear.
And like fireflies,
Like butterflies tonight,
Love flies.
Oh,
Love flies.
And baby you're gorgeous,
And you show it,
Oh you dont have to know it.
And baby you're crazy,
And just maybe,
You can rub off on me.
And baby you're silly,
And you make me,
Laugh and wanna be me.
And baby you're weirder,
When we're together,
And baby that's all I'll ever,
Ask for.
No,
I don't want nothin' more.
Cause you're gorgeous and crazy,
You're silly and weird.
You tell me everything I ever wanna hear.
And like fireflies,
Like butterflies tonight...
You're gorgeous and crazy,
You're silly and weird.
You're telling me all the things that I want to hear.
And like fireflies,
Like butterflies tonight,
Love flies.
Cause you're gorgeous and crazy,
SIlly and weird.
And baby that's all I want to hear.
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"gorgeous and crazy?" truely when i saw this i really thought it would be a piece of trash but the title attracted me more to it and i know it is not a piece of trash now rather it is intresting , entertaning and wonderful, sounds like you are into music.....hmmmmm especially love emotional poems that gladens the heart...your work is very wonderful i think if i am to grade it, i'll just go ahead to give you 99%lol.
Leavin that 1% for improvement ^-^
Thanks very much, I'm glad you liked it.
This is really sweet, I tend to go for stories and a completely different genre to this, but it caught my eyes and here I am, reading it.
The only thing I noticed was one typo, second from last line, 'SIlly and weird' you've put a capital 'i'. Other than that, I really like this, I hope someone makes it into a song because it's so sweet and well written. Keep it up!
~Molly
It is a song, I'll post it here once I stop having a sore throat. But thank you very much ^-^
I really want to listen to it! And I hope your sore throat goes soon. You're welcome:)
^-^ now go write more! I wanna read more of your work!
Hahaha, I've got more ready to upload on here. You need to write more too, I wanna read more!
There are plenty of songs and novel chapters to read. Just go to my profile and click on portfolio. You'll see it ^-^
I will
Hi there again! Once again, this is also perfectly perfect! Fabulous job!
I really love the emotion I got out of this song and the other one I reviewed earlier today! Great job! Like I said before, lyrics don't usually interest me, but you're lyrics really make me interested and make me want to read more! I really love romance in poetry, songs, books, you name it! But this isn't stupid! It's seems real! And that's hard to do! Keep up the good work! Looking forward to reading more!
~BlimeyLimey217
The next one will be inspired by you then ^-^
Awww! Idk what kind of inspiration I'll be, but thanks!
What are four words that describe you most.
Erm.... I'm a sad, sappy romantic with no romance! haha! But probably outgoing, energetic, erm.... haha!
Hehe I can work with that.
Tabbed parts are choruses.
So yes they will be the same.
Let me know what you think and you have my permission for those who want to make this into a song, to do so. All I ask is that you post a link of it on here so that I may put it into my new video!