Young Writers Society

M.B.Author wrote:I echo everyone else. It was good, but it was too short. You might of wanted to add more detail.

-- M.B.Author

I echo everyone else. It was good, but it was too short. You might of wanted to add more detail.

-- M.B.Author

I'm with what Eds(Whence) Said. I think that if you are going to pick such a chiched topic, at least try to make it your own. You can put more effert in this, hoenstly, how long did it take you to write this?

never be...what?

Overall, it was rather cliched and simplistic

Yes, yes... 'no one understands me! *slits wrist to the sounds of Simple Plan* WAHHH- Is all good and well if you're pursuing a career in....
Well, anyway, the point I was getting to is that it's OK to write a poem about being masked, but please do try to do something different with it, won't you?