No one knows
the real me
The fake one
is what you see
I never was
what you think I am,
and even with this mask,
I never will be.
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How can you be echoing me if you say something else entirely?
But on topic:
Don't be discouraged from writing because of this. Read a lot of poetry.
I think back to my earlier poems and...-shudders-
But I've read a lot since then, and I like to think I've improved some.
I echo everyone else. It was good, but it was too short. You might of wanted to add more detail.
-- M.B.Author
I'm with what Eds(Whence) Said. I think that if you are going to pick such a chiched topic, at least try to make it your own. You can put more effert in this, hoenstly, how long did it take you to write this?
never be...what?
Overall, it was rather cliched and simplistic
Yes, yes... 'no one understands me! *slits wrist to the sounds of Simple Plan* WAHHH- Is all good and well if you're pursuing a career in....
Well, anyway, the point I was getting to is that it's OK to write a poem about being masked, but please do try to do something different with it, won't you?