An island off the east coast,
Beside the yawning blue sky,
Constant love jumps from tree to tree,
Dances in the caves and
Floats amongst the island’s chain.
Points:
Time spent:
IP address:
Canary word: Present
Possible AI signals:
Original Text:
Are you sure you want to delete this comment? This cannot be undone.
Mark this comment as a review? Points will be awarded to the poster.
Your comment was posted, but it wasn’t long enough to count as a review. Reviews need about four complete sentences (at least 250 characters). Try writing another review that explains your thoughts in more detail — the author will appreciate it, and you’ll earn points for it.
140,220 Literary Works • 673,046 Reviews
There's something to be said for short poems, but I think it might be a little too short, it feels like it's a part of a longer poem. Excellent word choice, great imagery. Nice poem.
I don't think I've ever seen an ABC poem on here. And I didn't know you could write one with just A-D. I loved it! Simple and sweet with so much beauty. There's so much imagery.
The only line I would like to point out is the second to last:
The comma after the and was quite unnecessary and it made the poem pause a weird place. But other than that the poem flowed beautifully.
I'm no expert on poetry, but this was short and sweet. I saw no spelling errors. If it was just a little longer, it would be great.
I especially liked the line, 'Constant love jumps from tree to tree.'