Destiny's Face
Tears will turn into stars,
Leading me to a rightful path.
Drops of hope revive my pulse.
The moon and stars in the dark shine their brightest,
Calm seas and lakes seem emotionless.
Your gaze is warm today,
It melts a sombre face.
Here and now, we enter an opera of ruins,
Reaching to the heavens and spreading our wings.
Looking into a crystal ball, misted with tears,
My future doesn't seem bright, it's full of fears.
And somehow I realize, it's time to conquer,
Take over an epic world of darkness.
Please be my guide, take me to the nearest light,
We might find our right selves again.
Tears turn into a rainy day,
Here comes the singing frogs, it's time to play.
A white bird soars off, vanishing into distant hills.
I begin to wonder, will I ever again feel?
Staring into a crystal ball, blotched with a grim fate.
The future seems like it'll never change.
But I realize, it's time to be clever,
Destroy the whole world of darkness.
Hold my hand, guide me to find a new light,
If we do, soon we'll never hear a tearful cry.
I raise a dagger of hope and bring it down,
And here comes a destiny, shining within the dawn.
A start of a new day,
A vision of a bright fate.
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I liked this poem, it's one of those almost everyone can relate to types of poems.
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Wow. That was beautiful.