This is deep and mysterious. Love it!
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Hey Liberty500! Happy Review Day I hope you don't mind me swinging by today! Let's get into it, shall we?
Also, I do apologise if I don't understand something that appeared in a previous chapter and I comment on it.
Aunt Morina yelled up the stairs where me, Hannah, and Reny were playing Snakes and Ladders; we were playing in Reny’s room.
As soon as we heard the good news, we all shot up and dashed downstairs.
Aunt Morina smiled at us all, we all were kind of getting along.
"It was mostly because of you. You were the one who killed mom and dad."
"I'm coming too." Hannah said to me after her fight with Aunt Morina was over.
"Hey!"
"Sorry."
"No!"
"Hey! That could be the polite way of saying shut up!" Reny entered the conversation. We all laughed as Hannah parked the car in the hospital's parking lot.
As we entered, me and Reny fought over who was going to press the button pointing upwards for the elevator.
Father. He's my father. I believe it now. I must, after all, he is my dad
He knows I'm his child. He knows he's my father.
I looked at Aunt Morina, or should I say mom,
"You don't wanna spoil her mood do ya?"
I looked at Hannah and Reny, they had already chatted with him long enough.
"I just realized something today." dad said
"I heard that!" Hannah yelled from the opposite side of the car
I was telling her that I wanted to tell her something important and that she can't freak out.
"Spill!" she said again.
"Looks like my daughter is awake." a male voice said.
"It slipped from my mouth! Usually, when I'm mad, random things slip from my mouth!" she started giggling.
"Good morning, Belle!” dad exclaimed as soon as mom entered the breakfast room. Belle was mom’s nickname, she looked a lot like Belle, and she was belle. Belle in French means, beautiful.
Mother? Seriously? Did Hannah just - Oh right! Hannah is mom’s adopted child so of course she was going to say mother. But why mother? Why not mom? Is it because in fairy tales the princesses usually use mother for their step-mom? Well, mom wasn’t really her step-mom. She kind of was, but not really.
I was off in my own land, thinking up a bunch of stuff that probably were not even true.
"We should've kept the horses in the field,
mom fist-pumped me
“I know that you stole Coco, killed Maybelle and Frank, half imprisoned the girls, and I also know that Andy, here, is looking at Pumpkin a lot. They’ve been nickering to each other for so long!”
Hey there! First a disclaimer: I haven't read you previous chapters, so if I point out something that's actually not a problem if you know what happens before, then just ignore it. All right, starting with Chapter 24:
Aunt Morina yelled up the stairs where me, Hannah, and Reny were playing Snakes and Ladders; we were playing in Reny’s room.
"It was mostly because of you. You were the one who killed mom and dad."
“I know that you stole Coco, killed Maybelle and Frank, half imprisoned the girls, and I also know that Andy, here, is looking at Pumpkin a lot. They’ve been nickering to each other for so long!”
Hi liberty!I didn't really read your previous chapters, just coming in here to give it a boost out of the green room; so it's probable that I'll get a few things wrong
I'm just gonna be making comments as I read:
First,
Aunt Morina yelled up the stairs where me, Hannah, and Reny were playing Snakes and Ladders; we were playing in Reny’s room.
I nodded and said that I’ll be coming too.
“I’m coming too.” Hannah said to me after her fight with Aunt Morina was over.
It's hard to take courage
“That song is making me nauseous.” Hannah groaned.
“Deal with it.” I turned it back on and Reny giggled.
As we entered, me and Reny fought over who was going to press the button pointing upwards for the elevator. Hannah did it.
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