Fluffy
I pick up the teddy bear.
Its fur is soft,
Fluffy,
Long.
I run my hands through it,
Loving the cool feel.
I whisper to the bear,
"Fluffy."
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Aww this is such a cute poem! The simplicity of it, and it reminds me of my little plush animals.... *stops a moment to let out a happy sigh, then clicks 'like'* Really lovely poem, unique and quirky, I honestly can't find anything to nitpick, fantastic!
Keep it up!
~Crimson
wow it is a real good poem good describing
N'aaaw
xxx
Short and sweet.
I like that.
The words you used where simple, and yet they spoke out.
And guess what... I used to have a teddy Polar bear named Fluffy and he was awesome!
I find this poem very refreshing and unique.It kind of brings us all back to those days of stuffed animals and just being a kid. This poem, I don't know why, reminds me of The Velveteen Rabbit. I loved that book. I think this poem will touch everyone, reflecting on all those good childhood memories.
Fantastic!!!!
-Rayne
I have to say that it doesn't take long stanzas and pages of descriptive writing to make a poem. Your poem is perfect in it's simplicity and unique because of that. It's a great staring point and I hope to read more!