I've never really written poetry before, I tried my hand at it in year 8, everyone thought it wasnt mine and put me down for it. Ive never written since. Til now. There was a frequent member of a forum which I constantly visit; he passed away the other day. I was shocked and saddened as I never had the chance to meet him...and never will now. I wrote this a moment ago; took me five minutes or even less, so forgive if tis poor.
Let the thunderclouds of mourning come,
And the tears of remembrance fall,
Let the world stop spinning,
And despair strike us all,
For a loving man has left us,
To reside here no more.
In Memory of Chocolate.
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Sheesh why winter the time for dying, i guess it's because Spring is the time of renewal; and well. Oh i don't know i'm going ot try and write a poem watch me fail miserbly.
Sorry. If one was a man, then this could apply to him; hope you like it and think its fitting.
~Jiggy
*sighs*
2 people I knew died today....
So yeah...
*sighs*