1,000 Years From Now

by Gravity

Published July 4, 2015

16+ Violence

In Short Stories

Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for violence.

A/N: This is a work of fiction and I mean no offense to anybody of any religion, color or lifestyle. I also don't want to cause arguments. If you wish to state your opinion, feel free to do so in the comments, but please be respectful. 

Mae Winters awoke to a pounding on the door, her body slick with sweat as she threw the covers off. Her sister, Paige, slept soundly beside her. This was not the first disturbance in the middle of the night.

Her feet padded across the warm, wood floor as she walked to peer out the window. The scene in front of her eyes was hair-raising. Especially in her neighborhood, but she forced herself to look on. She saw torches lit and flashlights out, men and women alike stood stoic in white robes painted gold with swirling designs, but the most prominent was a large cross emblazoned over their chests. They dragged people out of their homes, questioning and whipping those who did not cooperate with shimmering electric whips.

Mae’s eyes widened, she fingered the small pendant that always sat in her throat before running to get her parents. Lights turned on and off as she raced through the house and she cursed silently to herself. What if they saw?

As she reached her parents bedroom, the pounding noises and screams got louder. The eerily smooth stones on the road outside reflected fire as cross bearing vigilantes lit houses on fire one by one.

Shots rang out through the night and Mae wondered why they were using such outdated weapons. Guns were a thing of the past, now everything happened through electrocution. Guns shot wires now, like tasers, and they had been that way since 3000. 15 years previous to this nightmare. Many people blamed the new technology for the terrorism that occurred on a daily basis. But Mae knew differently. Technology didn’t cause terrorism. Hate did. And ever since Same sex marriage was made legal in America in 2015, the Christians were at unrest. They held off for a few hundred years, but around the year 2950, the extremists began to pursue those who did not agree with them and those from other religions. And the Christians who refused to participate? They were executed just as swiftly as all the others.

“They’re coming,” she whispered hoarsely, “The Christians. They’re here.” Her Mothers each grabbed a knapsack they had prepared months before. They carried the necessities. Rations of food and water and a few outfits. It was only a matter of time.

Mae ran back through the house to wake her sister and grab the bags they’d prepared. She mentally kicked herself for not waking Paige first. Paige, at 5 years old, was 12 years younger than Mae and took more time getting out of bed. But they didn’t have time. Every second counted. The girls jammed socks and sneakers on their feet, taking their bags and meeting their Moms by the back door. Then they heard the pounding that rang throughout the house like the yell of a death sentence.

The small family of four hurried out the back door, sliding through the slick dew of the prosthetic grass as they ran. The smoke and smog in the air choked their lungs, slowing their pudgy bodies. Gunshots rang throughout the night, putting holes in the plastic ground. Then Paige fell, clutching her leg and screaming.

Blood gushed everywhere and her Moms fell beside her. They would risk their lives for their children, do anything for them.

“Viviana! Go with Mae.” Her Mom screamed to her other Mom. Viviana and Carol. They had been together for 20 years, married in secret by a sympathetic priest. Carol sat on the ground next to Paige as Mae ran harder, Viviana chasing after her. But eventually Viviana was shot down too and Mae was forced to listen to the screams of her family, bloodied and broken.

She heard heavy footsteps crushing the faux grass before she heard 3 more gunshots, and then silence. The sound of robes gliding along the ground was almost soundless, but Mae could hear it loudly and clearly. She wanted to fall to the ground and mourn her family, but she couldn’t. She had to keep going. Had to keep going for her Mothers, for the younger sister she loved so dearly. The little sister she never let out of her sight.

Mae finally found the Oasis, the alley splitting the two houses behind her yard. The street ahead of her was on fire and in the commotion she slipped between the houses to see the chaos.

A pregnant girl, no older than Mae, lay dead on the floor, blood leaking out of her head and her stomach. Her eyes stared ahead, unseeing and lifeless. Her bloodied hands covered her stomach, the baby in her womb that was considered an accident and a mistake to others, but a blessing to her.

Mae dropped to lay next to her, in pools of blood that came from others, shutting her eyes and staying as still as possible. She heard the yells of a man begging for his family’s lives, to spare them and take him instead. But he was quickly shot down as well.

They had no mercy, no respect. Chanting prayers from their Bible which had been altered so many times the words became corrupt. Words that had once been full of love and acceptance, that had once rang of freedom and hope, now portrayed hate and murder.

Eventually the sobs and screams quieted, robed figures walked through the houses they had broken into, double checking for signs of life. These were the houses where they found evidence of what they called “evil”. Two women sleeping in the same bed, a Torrah or a Qur’an. Sometimes, they killed you just because they saw no Bible. No cross on the mantel and no Bible verses on the walls.

Mae lay there all night, her body begging her for sleep. But the horrific images of murder and genocide flashed behind her eyelids. She couldn’t move, she was afraid to, even though the Christians had left long before. Nobody came to help, nobody came to aid those who may have survived. They were too afraid.

Mae sat up as yellow streaked the sky, the beautiful sunset out of place among the gray bodies and houses that all looked the same. Blood was dried in her hair and on her skin. Though she wasn’t injured on the outside, Mae felt as if her insides were ripping open. She sobbed, her head in her hands, tears mixing with the blood and the ash.

She got to her feet, barely able to carry her bag. Every step felt like a mile and she cringed every time she stepped. She tried to move around the bodies, but there were ashes on the ground. Ashes from objects, from people. Bone fragments that hadn’t quite burned crunched underneath her feet.

Mae was an orphan. She had no family now, her friends would probably report her if she sought help. And she turned to the sky trying to see the man her parents believed in. They believed in God. An accepting God, who was kind and blessed people. They prayed every night, they believed in the Christian God. But not the Christian God who was warped and changed by these people.

She looked up at the sunrise, brushing her bloody hair out of her face. And she said 3 simple words. “I’m done believing.”

***

Mae is a fictional character and the year 3015 has not happened yet. And yes, I am Christian. But if other Christians continue hating homosexuals and those who do not believe,nothing good will come of it.

Many homosexuals are Christian, there are tons of Christians who believe peacefully. The right way. But organizations like the Westborough Baptist Church and other extremists shame these believers.

This story is an exaggeration, but it represents hate in the most raw, physical form possible. Terrorism is not caused by technology. It is caused by hate. I mean no offense to those of you who do not target others that don’t believe. If we let this loathing fester inside ourselves, if we let it consume us, our humanity will be completely gone. And this is what will ensue.

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chhlovebooks
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chhlovebooks wrote a review Review · Sep 5, 2015

Greetings Gravity... have to say your masterpiece has unnerved me but it has done so in a good way. I agree with you on many of your points and I am fond of the way you portrayed the past and the history of what has happened in your world. Your transitions are almost flawless and you seem like you know what you are talking about. I am christian and i have a set of christian uncles who are married to one another so i know how you feel. I am just a naive person and i have yet to experiance this sort of brutality, but I know how hate can bring awful nightmares from the depths of the darkest of souls and set them out upon the innocents. You have created a story that has great power, but I believe that you could make it all the better by going deeper into how Mae felt. For example, when talking of how she has decided to stop believing, it almost sounds like you are stating facts. I suggest that you speak of how she feels more. Is she glad to have given up the responsibility of having to be the good kind of christian her parents want her to be? Is she feeling hateful towards GOD and this is her way of getting back at him for letting these kinds of monstrosities exist? Either way, you have done an amazing job here. Keep writing pleeaassee!

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Tizpi
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Tizpi wrote a review Review · Jul 26, 2015

This is a very powerful piece, a powerful and enjoyable one. I am not Christian, personally, but found this piece disturbingly familiar. Religion, despite it's original intention, is home to secluded extremist sects that seem to divulge away from the initial religious meanings. We apparently seem them in every religious organization excluding Christianity as an "all perfect" society. I doubt this particularity belief in a god is blemish free considering the media's portray of a perfect community, but it's refreshing to see it written out in such a... non-withholding manner.

I like it. I like it lots.

Anyways, I saw only a few things.

"The scene in front of her eyes was hair-raising. Especially in her neighborhood, but she forced herself to look on." ---- Sentences that you meant to merge?

"[...]road outside reflected fire as cross bearing vigilantes lit houses on fire[...]" ---- too many fires here, in my opinion. Maybe change the first one to "light" or rework the sentence?

There were a few other things here and there, but I really liked how smoothly you worked in the history of this alternate future. It works well and reads easily.

I think the mistakes I did find could be caught with a skim or two. Keep up the good work.

Happy writing :)

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FeatherPen
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FeatherPen wrote a review Review · Jul 5, 2015

This is a really powerful story; fundamentalism and hate have lead to so many tragedies over the course of history and unfortunately still does. You have also written it in a wonderfully gripping way.

There are a few things I picked up on reading it the second time.
Especially in her neighbourhood, why is this unusual in her neighbourhood?
She fingered the small pendant, is this important? You could add some symbolism in here too relate it to the story.
You would add more drama by replacing running with another verb eg 'then she startled and darted to wake her parents. That example also replaces get with wake.

You could also replace parents with Mothers to introduce that fact in a passage where there is less action going on.

Actually I can’t find anything really wrong with this piece. As far as grammar and spelling, the best thing to do is read it out aloud to find errors, but didn’t spot any.
Good work this is an excellent piece of writing with a strong message.

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CuriosityCat
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CuriosityCat commented Comment · Jul 4, 2015

That was amazing! :D I loved every single thing about this!

Gravity replied · Jul 4, 2015

Thank you, that's very nice of you to say and I appreciate it :)

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yizhongt
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yizhongt wrote a review Review · Jul 4, 2015

Hey there, yizhongt here to give a review.

What can I say? I loved this piece, loved it. It really hit home about how extremism and close mindedness can lead to violence and terrorism. And also how religion, any religion can be misinterpreted and misused by people just intend to spread hatred Honestly, I would not be surprised if this actually will happen in the states, and although I don't live in the US, I fear for the people who will be a target of persecution.

I was disappointed that Mae lost her faith in God in the end, disappointed. Now there are a few grammar mistakes in the piece, minor ones, you might want to read through it again to weed out the mistakes. Spelling wise I could not see any mistake whatsoever. It was a good piece and I have nothing negative to say about it.

p/s I'm a Christian too, and I believe that the spreading of hate by people who proclaim to be Christians is just disgusting, because the greatest commandment that God has ever given us is to love one another.

Gravity replied · Jul 4, 2015

As for the grammatical errors I understand that there may be some. It's been a very long time since I've written a short story and even longer since I wrote in third person past tense. I have a hard time with that usually, I typically write in first person present or past but I felt I would do better with descriptions and be less limited if I could describe things around Mae, not just what she saw in her limited perspective.

Thank you for the review, I appreciate your kind words.



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