This is a really beautiful poem that had an odd effect on me. The imagery of this piece, specifically the part where you describe the "cloyingly medicinal, right-up-your-nostrils scent" brings back very startlingly vivid memories of my childhood, specifically about living with my grandmother. I definitely think this is something that most people have at least some sort of memory related to, whether it be in their own home or in the home of an elderly relative, and I think you've done a great job of putting a very strange feeling into words. It is almost relieving in a sense that this sort of surreal memory from childhood is not all that uncommon.
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