Hi TheWeather, I'm new. Incogneato's the name! *Waves* Pardon if this isn't very helpful, I'm not really good at reviewing poetry
Well, one line really stuck out, and that was the "a psychopath is better than no path at all."
Really creative and really powerful! I had to laugh at the ingenuity of the line
This whole poem is bitter-sweet, although it's leaning closer to sweet then bitter in my opinion. I can really see why it featured! It's really nice piece. Thanks for writing it. It is encouraging to everyone I think, to realize that you can live a life. Suicide isn't the only option. This was really powerful and nice poem!
*Vanishes*
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