Heya! Again, here for "Adopt a novel" review!
You know so far I don't have any stylish complaints. Well, actually, I don't really have any complaints, I'm just trying to analyze your work(as much as the time would allow me to) and let you see how readers understand your work.
This one basically develops relation with Stephen. They are talking pretty casually (with some sexual connotations, and well, Robert had a pretty gay though there). He eventually goes mad when they openly start talking about if he is gay himself. Thats when the frog started to laugh(in his head, dont get me wrong I understood it xD), and thats when he had gone mad. Well, seems like he remembered the insult that kid he beat up there? Did he actually beat that kid up becouse of himself, not becouse of Stephen? I'm pretty torn about this one now, since he surely has something for Stephen, but his is an giant egoist shit himself.
Well, seems like new character is also being introduced now. Thats good, though I didn't think the story lacked any diversity so far. I'm enjoying this very much until now, I doubt that will change till the end.
-Alchemist
Points: 5984
Reviews: 87
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