I thought this was really nice. I'm not the biggest fan of poetry in general, but you have a way with words, Bella.
Your language is beautiful in this piece. I quite enjoy your descriptions. "A swirling liquid soul" UGH I can just feel it. Very nice job.
Although, I don't really like the fact that you ended with a question. I don't really know why, I guess it just doesn't wrap it up enough for me. Aside from that, I thought it was great, and I'd like you to post more poetry!
Alex Out!
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