Hey!
I was checking out your poem 'The unsaid Things' and this caught my eye.
I really liked it! I basically just finished googling all the words, wow! You know a lot of words.
In some ways I agree with what Aley said, you should try stretching the poem out more and help the reader add meaning to the words used, you could create a really weird and odd little narrative.
But, I also like how it is now. The way the words sound alone are enough for me. It is fun and exciting to read and when I say it out loud it makes me giggle.
You have used words well, and I like the way they flow and bounce of each other almost.
Good job and keep it up!
Nargles xx
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