ok i really love this i related so much with this poem the same thing always happens to me pretty much everyday. but onto the review, this poem flows very well and it really works for the way poem is set i love the form of this the way its setup is really cool. I love the imagery this poem gives when i read it i felt like i am right there talking to her and all this was actually happening and that's what makes a great poem when it gives the reader that feeling and you do it very well here. I also love the way you use the marking out of words so we can see whats going on in the characters head because this stuff really does happen. So once again very great poem i love it.
Points: 12
Reviews: 5
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