Young Writers Society

I am willing to do reviews, my YWS people. Here we go....

How I review:
I try doing a bit of everything. I do nit-picks, but I try doing more too.
Some examples of my reviewing:
Off Limits - Part One- Ellie's POV by Ellie:)
Two Opposites Never Attract by Forever Threnody
Edited Arriere Pensee Chapter 1 by Ashleigh Brown

Tell me if you want something specific in your review. If you only want the grammar mistakes, tell me.

What I will review:
Action/Adventure Fiction
FanFiction
Fantasy Fiction
Historical Fiction
Romantic Fiction
Other Fiction
Art & Photography

What I don't like to review as much:
Science Fiction
Dramatic Poetry
Lyric Poetry
Narrative Poetry
Other Poetry

What I definitely dislike reviewing:
Scripts
Lyrics
Non-Fiction

I will review all the top ones.
I will review the ones in the second group, but it probably won't be as good of a review.
I will not review those last three unless you can manage to convince me to do so.

I'm not asking for any payment. Donated points would be appreciated, but it is not required.

If you want the review, just post a link in this thread with it's title and genre.

*Cat

Hey, I could use a review on my piece found here: post514452.html#514452.


Also, I'm totally willing to donate a few points. Hey, I'm not doing anything with them. Haha, well, thanks.

Hey Cat! Do you think you can review this for me? IT's in fantasy and here is the link.
post513119.html#513119

Thanks bunches and bunches!
-Storm_Bringer

Done and done.

*Cat

Hi, Cat! Could you please review these for me?
Prologue, Part 1
Prologue, Part 2
Prologue, Part 3.

*Cookies*

I was wondering if you could do a review for me? Well, I hope you don't mind but it's part of a series. I'm not that far into it yet though. I'll include a summary so you know what's going on.

Link: topic44680.html
Genre: Other Fiction
Summary: Dakota finds out her best friend Luke's mom commits suicide. She is trying to help him get through it but she doesn't know how considering she's never been through that. Luke must decide if he wants to stay with his dad who lives farther away from Dakota or stay with his step dad who lives by Dakota. The previous parts are told in Dakotas point of view. This part is Luke's point of view.

If you could help that'd be great!

Um... Can you review the beginning of a series I am planning on starting? It's in fantasy fiction and isn't the best at the moment... I'd really appreciate your help in making it better.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic44529.html

Please please please review my Other Fiction piece. I'm working majorly on it until I have cracked it perfectly, so I might be asked for your feedback when I've edited it?

I will repay you with reviews of my own - Just click the link in my signature!

Okay....

*Cat

Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

-ALICE