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borntobeawriter · 2010-11-27T16:10:31Z

Hey everyone! I'm constantly browsing this site in hopes of finding another great chapter to reviewer. But I've decided to play it smart and let you come to me, instead. *laughs evilly* So come one, come all, and let me work my magic! What I will review: Fantasy Action/Adventure Romance General fiction. Both in short story and novel length. For the rest of the categories, I'm simply not very good at them and my reviews wouldn't be worth much. Also, I would really appreciate a comeback to my reviews. Either on this thread, or following my review on your own thread. I often go through a lot of my time and quite some patience to review and it would be nice to know it helped. Or not. :D These a few examples of my reviews: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post788677.html#p788677 http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post787353.html#p787353 http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post785938.html#p785938 http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post783670.html#p783670 My reasons for sharing these links? I can be very thorough, and sometimes, some might perceive me as harsh. I try to be as delicate as possible and demonstrate the good points as much as the bad. But if you read these and don't like my reviewing style, then please don't ask me to review; It's just annoying and rude to tell me my review stinks because you have not yet become accustomed to critism. Don't forget to link your chapter with your request and feel free to ask me for a review; I will get to it as soon as possible! I would like to add something here. I have a weird schedule. My fiancé is a trucker and when he's home, I stay away from the internet. So, if he's home, and you request a review, it might take a couple days. If not, I'm not it like jam on peanut butter. ;)

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Sat Feb 26, 2011 4:06 pm

canislupis says... · Sat Feb 26, 2011 4:06 pm

Hey Tanya!

If you're not too busy, would you mind taking a look at this for me? It's flash fiction, and I need to make it less confusing (only about 800 words).

Thanks!

Lupis

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Mon Feb 28, 2011 2:11 pm

MiaParamore says... · Mon Feb 28, 2011 2:11 pm

Hey there, Momsie!

I know you're a bit busy with those other reviews, so whenever you get time, could you like review part 1 and part 3 of my novel Turning the Tables? You've read the part-2 already, so it's upto you, but I don't need a review for that, so as you wish!

Here's the link for the two:
Turning the Tables(1.1)
Turning the Tables(1.3)

Please and thanks! :wink:

P.S. I'll review your piece by tomorrow!

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Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
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Mon Feb 28, 2011 5:29 pm

EmmaJane says... · Mon Feb 28, 2011 5:29 pm

Hey Mum!! (: I have started a new work in fantasy fiction. Little Macey. Don't be too mad at Tooth, he tried his best, but I just HAD to write this... (: I would very much like it if you took a look. Thank you, Mum!

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You're = Omission. You're quite strange...

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Mon Feb 28, 2011 8:52 pm

borntobeawriter says... · Mon Feb 28, 2011 8:52 pm

Kafka, Lupis, Shubhi and Emma: done!

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Mon Feb 28, 2011 10:47 pm

Tayler says... · Mon Feb 28, 2011 10:47 pm

I was wondering, if you had time would you mind reviewing this? I did some big editing and would love to know if its an improvement at all. Thank you much for doing these!

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Sun Mar 06, 2011 9:46 am

onceuponatim3xo says... · Sun Mar 06, 2011 9:46 am

Hello!

I was wondering if you would could possibly perhaps review this: topic76997.html

Pretty pwease and muchas gracias!
-Once

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Sun Mar 06, 2011 12:18 pm

borntobeawriter says... · Sun Mar 06, 2011 12:18 pm

Tayler, Once, done!

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Mon Mar 07, 2011 1:55 am

XxMattxX says... · Mon Mar 07, 2011 1:55 am

May you be so kind as to review my new entry.
topic77210.html
It's in general fiction.
Greatly appreciated!
Thanks!
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Thu Mar 10, 2011 3:57 pm

Kafkaescence says... · Thu Mar 10, 2011 3:57 pm

I'd just love it if you could review this. Thanka.

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Sun Mar 20, 2011 11:47 pm

Gheala says... · Sun Mar 20, 2011 11:47 pm

Woohoo! New excerpt!! topic77919.html#p835897

You're a candle, burning for our own good. Strange thing is that your wax is never over, girl. -.- Lol

I'm back to my YWS after months of disappearance, hoping that I'd gain the immunity of books and quills against the harmful realism of our world.

In case this made no sense, I'm just saying that I'm happy I'm back!

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Mon Mar 21, 2011 7:05 pm

IcyFlame says... · Mon Mar 21, 2011 7:05 pm

Well if you have the time I'd appreciate you looking at this http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=77898

Thanks

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Mon Mar 21, 2011 7:09 pm

xDudettex says... · Mon Mar 21, 2011 7:09 pm

Hey there!

I've seen some of your reviews around the forums and I'd really appreciate it if you could take a look at something for me. It's called 'Sometimes' and it's in romance novels. It's my first attempt at writing romance as a genre, not just a sub-plot, and I'd like to know what you think of it.

I would really appreciate your help if you have the time

viewtopic.php?t=77741 - the link to chapter one.

Thanks!

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Wed Mar 23, 2011 5:50 pm

borntobeawriter says... · Wed Mar 23, 2011 5:50 pm

Jojo, Kafka, Gheala, Icy and Dudette: Done! THanks for the great reads!

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Wed Mar 23, 2011 7:25 pm

TolyVilapoo says... · Wed Mar 23, 2011 7:25 pm

Hey. Im new to the site was hoping you could help review some of my works and give me a few ideas. I don't mind if u be harsh, because at the end of the day I just wish to improve and be the best I can be. I would like u to review my short story The Whispering Tower. Topic:78038. Thanks alot this would be really apreciated.
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[url]topic78038.html[/url]

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Wed Mar 23, 2011 7:25 pm

TolyVilapoo says... · Wed Mar 23, 2011 7:25 pm

Hey. Im new to the site was hoping you could help review some of my works and give me a few ideas. I don't mind if u be harsh, because at the end of the day I just wish to improve and be the best I can be. I would like u to review my short story The Whispering Tower. Topic:78038. Thanks alot this would be really apreciated.
Peace ToLy.

[url]topic78038.html[/url]

"You know you're in love when you can't go to sleep, because reality is finally better than your dreams." Dr Seuss

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