Hey borntobe! Would you mind reviewing this? It's Science Fiction, but not glaringly so, especially not yet, and I don't want feedback on the sci fi part - just how it works, in general, as a first chapter. Thanks if you can.
"Blah blah blah. You feel trapped in your life. Here is what I am hearing: happiness isn't worth any inconvenience."
Have I not commanded thee? Be strong and of good courage; be not afraid, neither be thou dismayed, for the lord thy God is with thee whithersoever thou goest.
I'm new to this site, so I don't quite know how all this works, but I have a short fiction piece that I would LOVE to have reviewed, if you would be so obliging the link is here: http://just-a-stop.blogspot.com/2011/04 ... or-it.html or this one, on this site. I don't really know if it has to be posted here? so i did i don't know. *scratches imaginarily bald head* topic80364.html
Tanya, you babe. Don't worry, I'm not hitting on you. You've got a man, plus you're knocked up with Skinsy junior. Hitting on you would be bad. And lesbianish.
Sorry about that.
When you get some free time, could you and Skinsy junior check out the latest part of Stop and Stare for me, please? topic80608.html
I felt the need to post here because this forum now has that cool red writing at the top of the screen, and I like it. It amuses me. Please and thank you!
I'm linking you to my novel, novel.php?id=1419 I only have two chapters up, although I may put a third up later. I would really appreciate a review for chapter 2 but it probably makes more sense if you read chapter one. I'm happy to return the favor. If you want just post a link at the end of your review and I'll check it out thank you!
"One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes." The Little Prince
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
